Flare

[dragonflare]

Name: Flare
Age: 18 Spring
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Rank: Candidate
Location: Sayaie

Personality: Flare is known to some people as a sweet person. Flare is really good at being calm, when most people should be upset or nervous. He just can help it, and when he isn't calm, he just explodes. Flare has a hard time being mean to people. When his mean side does show, it comes out in big outbursts. When his mean side shows he has a mixture of emotions, like angry and upset. Flare is a really quiet person. Its hard to get him to talk, and when he does talk he talks in a kind of whisper like voice. Sometimes he can be very talkative though, once he gets into a conversation its like flicking a switch. Once he is talkative its hard to get him to shut up allot of times. He is very emotional, so sometimes you have to watch what you say. At times, when he is really frightened he can be a bit of a coward. He gets confused very easily, especially when things get complicated. Flare usually thinks before he acts, and doesn't get in much trouble as much as you might think he would. He sometimes has a hard time saying things when he feels upset. He just doesn't want to hurt any ones feelings, so he keeps his inside.


Appearance: Flare has orangish-yellow hair that droops down to his neck. He has no bangs. He is about 5 feet 7, he weighs about 150 pounds. He has thin eyebrows, and has light green eyes. He likes to wear, a red shirt, green pants, and black shoes. If he is not wearing that then he might be wearing something like, a white shirt, black shorts, and black shoes, something like that. He is skinny, and not very muscular. He has white and straight teeth, he often smiles. He doesn't like to talk much, if he does talk, he kind of whispers. He has a light tan.

Family: Father- Name: Clyde Age: 39 Work: Farmer Mother- Name: Disiree Age: 36 Cousin- Name: Nala Age: 27

History: Flare loved his parents, more than anything else in the world. He remembered his mother, who stayed to watch him. His father that came home every day with crops to eat. He remembered Disiree telling him about the Simourv's and Xymokoxi. The good times they were. But then one day Clyde went out to go to work and never came back, Disiree went to look for him but she never came back either. So Flare was forced to live with his cousin, Nala, she was nice and all, but when she got into one of her bad moods, things got messy. One day she got so frustrated and Flare tried to calm her down, she yelled at him to get out and never come back. Flare ran out the door, and he knew she didn't mean it. But the way she said it was hurtful. After running for five minutes blindly looking for somewhere to go, Flare realized he didn't even know where he was. So he just found a tree sat under it, and fell asleep. When he woke up there was a blue Simourv in front of him. It belonged to a blue rider names C'en. C'en let Flare ride back to Nala's home. When Flare got in the house, Nala had been worried to death. Flare asked Nala if she knew anything about how the riders came to be, she didn't know much but she told him, all she knew. Flare seemed interested in it, and decided he wanted to become a rider one day.

Desired Color:
Blue
Undesired Color: Green
Reasoning: Because the Blue can be calm, while the green changes mood.
Injury/Mauling: Only until bruises begin to show.

[Bre]

You need to change the names. Flare is tolerable, but Amazon and Demon are not at all appropriate.

You have permission to use C'en, correct?

Please go through and read it aloud. If something doesn't sound right, fix it. Pay careful attention to your grammar, and spelling (there is a spell check right at the bottom of the posting space).

[Bre]

Alright, now that the names are fixed, by the listed ages, his mother was 12 when Flare was born, and his father was 16, and his cousin was born only three years after his mom (which is possible, but not extraordinarily common).