Lan
SENIOR COMMANDER
[M:-104]
sol omnibus lucet
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Post by Lan on Jul 13, 2010 20:58:32 GMT -8
Not sure if this counts for staff members, Sakoru, but diasks given (until Bre says otherwise) and edited.
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Bre
SENIOR PHOENIX
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r & t & m & e & m
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Post by Bre on Jul 14, 2010 19:05:35 GMT -8
That's fine, Lan, though, ya' know, it may have been nice if she'd pick up on that when she was actually supposed to be proofing those as staff.
Anyway, diasks done for Morgana's pet.
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zeis
WINGLETMASTER
[M:-760]
Posts: 441
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Post by zeis on Jul 18, 2010 0:09:40 GMT -8
I would like to buy an extra character space please, Bre. :3
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Bre
SENIOR PHOENIX
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Posts: 815
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Post by Bre on Jul 18, 2010 3:18:14 GMT -8
Diasks done. Space added.
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Fox
WINGLETMASTER
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Posts: 362
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Post by Fox on Jul 26, 2010 0:52:34 GMT -8
Hey! So I was bored and browsing the boards and I noticed a couple of mistakes in the descriptions. Nothing major; just a word dropped here and there, so I figured I'd just pop it in here. No worries if it's not applicable for the diasks, just wanted to notify you guys. ^^
First: The Learn description. Third sentence.
'This the place to go in either case, because here is where information about GS is stored.'
It should be 'This is', as you might have noticed. :]
Second: The Advertise description. Last sentence.
'If your site has a cbox or shoutbox we are allowed to use, we will try to leave you a note about the deletion, so you can do your post your ad correctly.'
So you can post your ad correctly?
Third: Archive description; first sentence.
'This is the history of GS, the hard copy, unabridged copy of the history of GS.'
Yeah, a bit of repetition there. ^^ 'Hard, unabridged copy' I believe.
Fourth: Ground Caverns description; second sentence.
'They play home to those in the eyrie who are not riders or destined to be possibly one day be riders. '
To possibly one day be riders. Ex-nay the extra 'be'.
Fifth (a tiny one): Feeding pens description; second sentence.
'In order to accommodate for them,'
I believe this should be 'accomodate them' not accomodate for them. ^^
Sixth: Itnala description; first sentence.
'Built across the sound from Sayaie,'
I don't know what this is supposed to be, or even if it's really a mistake. If it isn't then I'm sorry, but then it's a bit too obscure a reference for me personally.
Sooo yeah, this was me being very, very bored and then just nitpicky. ^^; Hope it helped!
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Kilnarak
RIDER
[M:-254]
Adventure-seeker Killy is go.
Posts: 393
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Post by Kilnarak on Jul 26, 2010 1:06:43 GMT -8
Can buy an extra character space, and also name color? #C9AE13
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Lan
SENIOR COMMANDER
[M:-104]
sol omnibus lucet
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Post by Lan on Jul 27, 2010 11:41:38 GMT -8
Edited and diasks given to Fox for five corrections. A sound is a body of water. =)
Extra character space given to Kilnarak and diasks taken for extra space. No diasks taken for the name color yet, as it has not been changed. Only Bre can update that, I'm afraid.
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Kilnarak
RIDER
[M:-254]
Adventure-seeker Killy is go.
Posts: 393
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Post by Kilnarak on Aug 3, 2010 17:41:32 GMT -8
Wanting for to buy a female medium-size hunting dog for Mashiro. Her name is Yukimori.
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Bre
SENIOR PHOENIX
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Posts: 815
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Post by Bre on Aug 4, 2010 12:23:43 GMT -8
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Kilnarak
RIDER
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Adventure-seeker Killy is go.
Posts: 393
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Post by Kilnarak on Aug 5, 2010 23:05:02 GMT -8
Bre, on the candidates page, you have Amaryllis listed as Kat's character. Isn't she Quill's?
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Bre
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Post by Bre on Aug 6, 2010 0:05:28 GMT -8
Fixed, but what does this have to do with trader?
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Kilnarak
RIDER
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Adventure-seeker Killy is go.
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Post by Kilnarak on Aug 6, 2010 1:42:39 GMT -8
Wasn't sure where else to post it, since other people post correction stuff here. ;p
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Kat
RIDER
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Post by Kat on Aug 15, 2010 21:47:56 GMT -8
I posted three ads today. Just thought I'd let everyone know.
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Bre
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Posts: 815
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Post by Bre on Aug 16, 2010 3:55:59 GMT -8
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Fox
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Post by Fox on Aug 22, 2010 5:34:24 GMT -8
I'd like to buy a pet cat name Lady please. :]
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